西安好的雅思写作培训班老师都会中招的写作考题怎么破

西安好的雅思写作培训班，西安雅思写作培训补习班，雅思考题中，有一类这样的考题，无论是对于久经沙场的考生还是刚刚入门的菜鸟，都能快速的理解，瞬间满字，但是后拿到一个和自己预期差很多的分数。

很多人思前想后，分析考题中的每一个字，发现并没有什么不妥，因此偏执的认为是考官的原因，感觉自己被针对了。其实，看似很好写的文章，往往是机关重重，我们的文章看似面面俱到，实则都只是点到为止，而并没有剖析考官想要的角度。

那么如何领着这些门口打转转的考生进入雅思得分的大门，咱们今天细细的说。

▎我们拿2018年的真题来分析：

In most countries, prison is the most common solution for the problem of crime. However, the more effective solution is to provide people with better education so that they do not become criminals.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

犯罪类的话题，这个题目看似限定在关监狱的优缺点，但实际上还有一面是对比education.

犯罪类的题目我们很容易想到：监狱的建造和维护成本高；罪犯在监狱里能够更好的得到教育；提高就业解决社会矛盾可以减少人们的犯罪动机。

但是和本题对比，明显的有偏差，为什么我们会跑偏呢？，我们看到crime本能想到的就是犯罪，这只切合了题目的大话题。其次，通过分析不难发现。

the more effective solution is to provide people with better education so that they do not become criminals. 旨在介绍通过教育减少犯罪的问题，很多考生会忽略。

▎那么应该如何避免离题的问题呢？

还是两点，，确保论点包含了题目全部的关键词，然后，就是在段末加上一句话强调题目。

针对本题，不少考生会站在“在监狱中再教育会更好”，针对这个论点，我们可以改为 在监狱中，知识原始的惩罚，通常很难真正改变一个人，二次犯罪都很高，并且罪犯们关在一起，反而可能增加他们的接触，加深他们的邪念，相比于于此，事前教育，可以让他们认清犯罪的后果，明辨是非，。

◆ Sample：

It would be more beneficial if prisoners receive education in jails. This method effectively kills the boring and repetitive jail time, and by acquiring some skills in prison, the criminals are more likely to find a decent job after release. Potentially, the recidivism rate would be controlled.

◆ 修改后：

It is the legal education before any unlawful actions that can fundamentally tackle crime. This is because incarceration cannot rehabilitate the lawbreaker effectively in many countries, as evidenced by the high recidivism rate globally.

Besides, locking up all social evils in the same place facilitates communication among them, contributing to the reinforcement of their antisocial instincts. In comparison, if they are fully aware of the consequence of their behaviors and have a clear and correct understanding of what actions are socially and legally acceptable, they would be much less likely to go astray.

针对这些常见的看似易得分，实际有很多潜在的坑的题目，考生在下笔定要小心小心再小心。

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